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Chapter 1

Oct 9, 2026 · 1,125 words · 5 min read

Air in the fourth kiln gallery smelled of charred pine and roasted grease, but it was the quiet between the bellows strokes that made Lieven stop on the brick gangway.

A draft that size ought to roar. Twenty ox-hide bellows pumped air through clay conduits into the belly of the Lower Four smelter, yet the stone gallery had gone dead, swallowing the scuff of clogs and the hiss of cooling slag. Up on the catwalk, the leather sleeves kept heaving in rhythmic tandem, driven by the steady march of the tread-crews, but the resulting blast never reached the furnace trench.

Lieven adjusted the heavy apron across his chest and pressed his bare palm against the bronze intake flue.

The metal did not rattle with the usual shudder of turbulent flame. It thrummed with a smooth, sweet note, pitched high enough to make the molars ache.

"Marten," Lieven called down into the lower trench, leaning over the bronze handrail. "Kill the left damper. The intake is catching a back-draft, or some fool packed the charcoal hopper with green timber."

No answer came from the pit. Down among the soot-streaked arches, three young tenders stood near the charcoal mounds, but only one moved. Marten had set down his iron rake against the curb. The boy took a slow, unhurried stride toward the kiln’s secondary eye, his boots scuffing through heaps of black cinders.

"Marten," Lieven said again, louder. His voice sounded thin, clipped off by the strange acoustic drag of the gallery. "Step clear of the arch. The pressure gate will blow if the draft backs up into the tuyère."

The boy did not turn. His shoulders hung slack, arms dangling at his sides like wet hemp. Across his soot-stained face spread a broad, tranquil grin, unblinking eyes fixed directly on the blinding glare of the inspection port.

Lieven swung over the bronze railing and dropped five feet onto the packed mud floor. The impact sent a dull jar up his shins, but he did not pause to shake it out. He moved between two cooling troughs, the ambient heat baking the hair on his forearms.

"You deaf today, boy?" Lieven reached out to seize Marten’s shoulder, intending to haul him back from the heat wash.

He froze three paces short.

Through the circular viewing port in the kiln wall, the bed of mountain oak charcoal was not burning down to gray ash. The incandescent embers had piled themselves against the ceramic grating in a tight, rounded ridge. Two hollow pockets formed dark sockets; beneath them, a jagged seam of black cinders split into an upturned, gaping mouth.

It was Roeland’s jawline. The same heavy, broken chin his brother had carried out of the deep mine shafts before the spring collapse took him.

A cold prickle ran across Lieven’s scalp despite the blistering heat pouring from the brickwork. The draft did not blow or hiss; it sang. From within the white core of the coals came a low, vibrating murmur, pure and harmonized, carrying the cadence of an old work-shanty Roeland used to whistle over the quench vats at the close of every pour.

Turn the damper and walk into the glow, the heat seemed to whisper without words, pulling at the center of his chest. The fire is cool inside.

Lieven’s boot dragged forward an inch against the mud floor. His breath hitched in his throat, dry and tasting of sulfur.

Beside him, Marten let out a soft sigh of relief and lifted one bare arm toward the latch of the primary loading door. If the hatch swung open, four hundred pounds of white-hot slag and burning charcoal would spill across the trench floor, turning the lower gallery into an ash-choked tomb.

Lieven bit the inside of his cheek until blood flooded his tongue. The sharp, iron taste cut through the sweet ringing in his ears.

He lunged sideways, grabbing a heavy iron fire-tong from the tool rack with his right hand. Instead of wrestling Marten away from the door, Lieven swung the iron bar with all his weight against the bronze intake flue.

CLANG.

The strike was deliberate, ugly, and discordant. Lieven hammered the pipe again, dragging the iron teeth across the corrugated seams, producing a screeching scrape that grated like wet gravel between two millstones.

CLANG-RATTLE-SCREECH.

The pure tone in the gallery fractured into jagged shards.

Marten gasped, staggering backward as if struck in the chest. His eyes cleared, wide with sudden panic, and his heel caught the rim of a slag trough, sending him sprawling into the black dust.

"Master Lieven!" Marten wheezed, clutching his ribs on the ground. "I—the heat—there was music in the flue—"

"Get behind the pillar," Lieven barked, his voice raw. He did not lower the iron tongs. He struck the bronze pipe two more times in a ragged, arrhythmic cadence, battering the last traces of the hum out of the metal. "Now, Marten! Back against the retaining wall!"

The other two apprentices at the charcoal hoppers blinked and shook their heads, looking around the gallery with dull confusion, like men shaken awake from a mid-day stupor in the sun.

"Master?" one of them muttered, holding an empty wicker basket. "Did the tread-line stop?"

"Keep those hoppers filled and keep your clogs moving," Lieven told them, keeping his eyes on the furnace wall. "And don't look directly into the tuyère ports."

He stepped to the inspection hatch, gripping the tongs with both hands. Inside, the coals had collapsed into a chaotic, formless mound of red embers. The face was gone. Only glowing chunks of hardwood remained, spitting bright sparks of resin against the ceramic grating.

"The draft was blocked," Marten stammered from the shadow of the brick pillar, rubbing his blackened temples with shaking fingers. "I thought... I thought someone was calling me for the ceremonial pour. I could hear the elder chant."

"Nobody called," Lieven said. He laid the back of his hand against the tuyère intake pipe. The sweet harmonic vibration had dissolved, replaced by the familiar, rough shudder of forced air. "The temple casters up top would rather breathe copper fumes than admit their sacred flues are warped, but this isn't soot buildup. Soot doesn't hold a choir."

He stepped closer to the port and raised the tongs to secure the secondary safety pin over the latch.

Before the iron tip touched the clay viewing plug, the thick ceramic disc shuddered. A hairline fracture zigzagged across its pale surface, glowing with faint orange light from within. With a sharp snap, the plug cracked in two, dropping a shower of clay shards into the glowing belly.

From the open fissure, a single, crystal-clear note rose into the air, lingering motionless against the roar of the charcoal draft.

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I.H. Mace

I.H. Mace writes fantasy about quests with real costs, unlikely allies and choices that shape kingdoms. The voice is brisk and inventive. Every series is built for binge reading, with arcs that land and threads that…

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