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Chapter 6

Oct 16, 2026 · 1,303 words · 6 min read

How does a five-hundred-pound wheel of hard goat cheese vanish down a mountain without grinding grooves into the scree? That question drove Mounkoro Danzoui past the lower stone pastures two hours before sunrise, his boots crunching frozen clover while the valley lanterns of Tissabara guttered below. Forty-eight hours remained of the armistice stay Bailiff Bounani had signed on the Solstice dais. If Mounkoro could not locate the press that molded the cheese before the third sunset, Elder Djemani's herdsmen would cross the boundary ford with ash clubs, and young Baheri would swing from the border oak.

Beside him, Baheri carried an iron lantern wrapped in oiled cloth, his breath puffing white against the dark pines. Two willow panniers hung from Gazelle's pack saddle, clinking softly with tallow wax, brass calipers, a horn-handled gouge, and the sample wedge taken from the cleaved champion wheel. Inside Mounkoro's woolen vest pocket, wrapped in dry parchment, lay the strip of indigo silk dropped by the prowler outside the cellar vent. The foreign fragrance of bergamot still lingered on the threads, sharp and discordant in the cold upland air.

"Master Mounkoro," Baheri whispered, glancing behind them at the shadow of the valley. "The herdsmen along the south ridge are already lighting signal fires. They think we fled."

"Let them watch the smoke," Mounkoro said, adjusting the rope bridle in his hand. "Smoke breaks no bones. Look to the grade instead."

The goat path steepened past twelve hundred paces, climbing through crooked stands of dwarf juniper where granite boulders split the timber line. Loose grey shale covered the trail, sharp as broken slate and resting at a slope that sent pebbles tumbling toward the tree crowns with every misplaced step.

Mounkoro halted at the bend where the public herd track swung south toward the Medrouani summer commons. He dropped to one knee, laying a calloused hand flat against the scree.

The shale lay loose and uniform across the narrow track, peppered only with the split-toed prints of seasonal sheep and the scuff of light mountain boots.

"Look here, Baheri," Mounkoro said, pointing his bone mallet at the shale. "A five-hundred-pound wheel resting in an ash sled or a timber handcart puts nearly four hundred pounds of shear against any downhill axle. Down a twenty-degree drop of loose scree, an iron tire would plow a trench six inches deep. If the team braked, the skids would leave long white gouges on the bedrock beneath the gravel. Where are the scars?"

Baheri held the lantern close, scanning the grey gravel bed from bank to slope. "Nothing. Not even a dragged shoe."

"Nothing," Mounkoro agreed, rising and brushing grey grit from his canvas apron. "The wheel was cured above sixteen hundred paces in freezing air. It was salted in meltwater below four degrees. Yet it never touched this trail. That leaves only one conclusion: whoever moved that giant had a graded cart road."

"There is no cart road on the north face," Baheri said, his voice tightening. "The old monks abandoned the heights sixty years ago when the springs dried. Nothing runs up here except goat tracks and falcon nests."

Gazelle snorted loudly, shaking her grey ears. She took three brisk steps forward, reached the icy creek that cut across the trail, and drove all four hooves into the mud like cedar stakes. Her ears flattened against her neck, and her lower lip protruded in absolute refusal.

Baheri sighed and reached for his coat pocket. "She smells the water."

"She smells the slope," Mounkoro said. "Give her the toll, or we will spend the morning discussing pasture rights with her backside."

Baheri pulled two dried apple rings from his pouch and held them flat on his palm. Gazelle inhaled the sweet scent, curled her velvet lip back, and took both rings in one wet, crushing snap. She chewed with deliberate slowness, swallowed, and then drove her square muzzle directly into Baheri's ribcage, hunting for a third.

"That is all you get, greedy girl," Baheri muttered, rubbing his ribs.

Gazelle did not turn toward the creek. Instead, she swung her heavy head to the left, pulling the lead rope taut in Mounkoro's fingers. She stepped into a dense thicket of blackthorn and mountain briars that choked a rocky cleft behind two leaning junipers.

"Gazelle, no," Baheri said, grabbing the pack strap. "That is dead brush. It leads into the ravine."

Mounkoro held up a hand. The donkey did not forge blindly into thorn; she stood with her ears forward, nosing the base of a juniper trunk.

Mounkoro parted the prickly branches with his staff. The outer wall of briars looked wild and untended, but three feet inside the thicket, the lower branches had been sheared off with a sharp billhook. The pale cut marks on the juniper wood were clean, showing fresh amber resin that had only begun to crust.

Beyond the cut boughs lay a sunken track, four feet wide, cut into the solid granite shoulder of the ridge.

Mounkoro stepped through the gap, waving Baheri after him. Gazelle trotted behind without hesitation, her panniers clearing the trimmed branches by inches.

Under the damp carpet of pine needles and scattered moss, the stone bed showed two parallel channels, worn smooth by decades of cart wheels and rimmed with dry shale. Inside the left groove, a fresh flake of iron rust lay bright against the stone, sheared away by a heavy axle flange. Beside it, the mud bore the crisp, rectangular print of an iron skid drag used to slow a heavy load on steep declines.

"A timber way," Mounkoro said softly, touching the crushed stone with his thumb. "Built by the abbey builders to haul foundation granite, and kept cleared under the brush."

Baheri dropped to his knees, staring at the fresh rust flake. "The prowler from last night. He came from up here."

"A heavy sled traveled down this track within the week," Mounkoro said, standing straight. "And whoever guided it down was careful to prop the cut branches back into place when they passed the lower opening."

They climbed in silence for another hour along the hidden ledge. The air grew thinner and colder, biting at their ears and noses. Patches of crusty snow clung to the crevices of the cliffs, sheltered from the summer sun. High above the timber line, the limestone crags loomed against the pale morning sky, stark and grey.

At sixteen hundred paces, the sunken cart road curved around a massive outcrop of dark granite and ended at a desolate stone terrace.

Before them stood the ruins of the Saint-Medard Hermitage. Its timber roof had collapsed decades ago, leaving jagged gables of grey ashlar standing like broken teeth against the mountain crest. Nettles and wild alpine thistles choked the former courtyard, but near the eastern wall, where the cliff face formed a natural barrier against the north wind, a low stone outbuilding remained intact under heavy slate tiles.

Beside the outbuilding's doorway, half-buried under rotting pine boughs, sat a broken wooden transport frame and two heavy hemp hoisting tackle blocks, their brass pulleys greased with fresh sheep tallow.

Mounkoro approached the low oak door of the outbuilding. The frame had been reinforced with iron corner brackets, and a heavy sliding bolt held the latch bar. The padlock that once secured the hasp lay on the ground, its shackle cut cleanly through by three strokes of a cold chisel.

Baheri raised the lantern, his hand trembling slightly. "The dairy vault."

Mounkoro pressed his shoulder against the seasoned oak door and shoved. The rusted iron latch shrieked, the hinges groaned against limestone grit, and the heavy slab swung inward into the freezing shadows.

From the dark depths of the stone floor, trapped beneath the mountain cold, drifted the unmistakable, pungent aroma of curdled goat whey and aged brine.

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Eden Underhill

Eden Underhill writes cozy fantasy about kind communities, small shops and found family and good food and quiet courage. The voice is soft-hearted and bright. The focus stays on character: what people want, what it…

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