Reader Preferences

Font
Size
Width
Background
Paragraph spacing
Indent

Chapter 1

Sep 28, 2026 · 2,442 words · 11 min read

Brass does not lie, which makes it considerably more trustworthy than my employers.

I kept both hands tight on the wheel of the utility truck as the tires hammered across the frozen ruts of Route Four. It was twelve minutes past five in the morning. The thermometer glued to my cracked plastic dashboard read twelve degrees, though the heater core only coughed out lukewarm air that smelled like scorched copper wiring and damp wool socks.

I had one modest ambition for this shift. An abnormal pressure warning on Gate Seven’s telemetry board had tripped twenty minutes ago, pointing to a broken sensor relay high on Pass Nine. I wanted to verify the physical barrier, clear the fault, and get back down to my workshop in the lower maintenance yard before either resort owner realized I was awake.

If Danika Mravka found me first, she would spend twenty minutes pacing my concrete floor in her fur-trimmed parka, demanding to know why the south chairlifts were running five minutes behind schedule and accusing her co-owner of siphoning diesel from the groomers. If Levskor Chizk caught me instead, he would lean against my steel workbench in a tailored cashmere overcoat, asking in his quiet, patrician voice if I could recalibrate the high-altitude pressure sensors so his Zurich investors did not panic over the resort’s lack of natural snowfall.

Both of them had inherited a playground of sheer granite, rusted cable cars, and seventy miles of groomed ski runs. Neither of them knew how to repack a wheel bearing.

Privoz was starving for snow this winter. When a ski mountain goes dry in mid-January, owners do not look at the weather forecast. They look for someone to blame.

The truck rattled around the sharp hairpin of Pass Nine. Up here, above the tree line, the mountain stopped pretending to be a luxury alpine retreat. It was just a brutal wall of gray slate and frozen shale. The wind whipped off the northern chutes, spitting granular rime across my windshield with the sound of thrown gravel.

Ahead of me, wedged into the narrow rock neck where the upper snowpack drained toward the valley road, sat North Gate Seven.

It was a twelve-foot barrier of structural iron and heavy galvanized steel mesh. Built forty years ago by municipal engineers who understood that forty tons of moving slab does not respect resort boundary markers, Gate Seven was designed to catch minor slides before they could bury the service access road.

My dashboard radio gave a sharp burst of static, popped twice, and died. The cold always ate the digital relays first. Electronic keycards and magnetic solenoids were useless above six thousand feet; frost got into the circuit boards, condensed into ice, and shorted the wiring before breakfast. That was why Privoz still paid me to carry forty pounds of hand-cut brass keys, carbon-steel pry bars, and grease guns on my belt.

I pulled the truck to a stop ten yards short of the barrier. The dual high beams cut through the gray pre-dawn gloom, painting long yellow triangles across the packed gravel apron.

Something was wrong with the chain.

Usually, the five-ton retention shackle hung dead center from the main stanchion, locked tight with a four-inch hardened brass padlock I had cleaned and packed with low-temp lithium grease last Tuesday. From the truck cab, the shackle looked slack. It hung at an odd, listing angle, like a dislocated shoulder.

I pulled my heavy leather work gloves over my raw knuckles, zipped my canvas parka up to my nose, and pushed the driver's door open into the sub-zero gale.

The wind hit me like an open hand across the face. It smelled of crushed pine needles, frozen stone, and something sharp and chemical that made the back of my throat burn.

I walked toward the gate, my steel-toed boots crunching through the wind-crust.

The lock had not been cut with a torch or snapped with a breaker bar. Bolt cutters leave clean, angled shear marks on hardened steel, with pinched lips where the jaws bite through the casing. A torch leaves blackened slag and bubbled paint.

This lock looked like a rotten pear.

The heavy brass body of the padlock was slumped and hollowed out. A crust of sickly yellow sulfur crystals coated the faceplate, dripping down into the retaining shackle in calcified green streaks. The entire internal tumbler assembly had liquefied and dribbled onto the frozen gravel, leaving behind an empty, warped shell that reeked violently of burned vinegar and rotten eggs.

I crouched down, keeping my mouth and nose tucked into my fleece collar to avoid the lingering fumes.

"Fluorosulfonic paste," I muttered aloud. My breath puffed white against the pitted iron.

Nobody bought this stuff at a local hardware supply. To chew through four inches of naval-grade brass in twelve-degree weather, you needed an exothermic chemical reagent, stabilized in petroleum jelly so it would not freeze before reacting. It was military-grade demolition paste. Expensive. Dangerous to handle. Lethal if you got a single drop on your bare skin.

I touched the edge of the steel stanchion with the thick pad of my leather glove. The reaction was cold to the touch now. It had happened at least an hour ago, maybe two.

A low, metallic groan shuddered through the rock beneath my boots.

My head snapped up.

Above Gate Seven, the north chute rose into the dark, a sheer, four-hundred-yard funnel of cracked slate and wind-drifted slab. This was the worst kind of winter for slides. Because Privoz had received only six inches of dry powder over three weeks of hard ice, the upper snowpack had formed a hollow sugar layer known as depth hoar. It was unstable, brittle, and sitting on an eight-hundred-foot ramp of slippery shale.

Without the master lock holding the tension shackle tight, the two leaves of Gate Seven were slowly parting under the weight of the drift behind them.

The gap between the iron panels was already six inches wide. If another gust came howling through the notch or the morning sun warmed the shale by three degrees, eighty tons of hard slab would shove the gate open, shear the concrete footings, and bury Route Four under ten feet of compacted ice.

"Not on my shift," I said to the empty pass.

I turned on my heel and sprinted back to the bed of the utility truck.

I threw back the heavy vinyl tarp, fighting the wind that tried to whip it out of my grip. Bolted to the truck bed was the steel job box I had welded into place four years ago. I flipped the latch, dug past the spare hydraulic lines and socket sets, and hauled out my heavy field kit: a three-foot tempered iron pry bar, a twelve-inch forged steel screw clamp, and twenty feet of three-eighths transport chain with forged grab hooks.

The chain weighed thirty-five pounds of dead, freezing iron. I slung it over my shoulder, grabbed the pry bar and clamp in my left hand, and ran back to the trembling gate.

The iron was groaning louder now, a high-pitched stress ping that vibrated through the frame. High up in the chute, a rattle of loose shale skittered down the rock face, clattering off the upper safety mesh. The snowpack was waking up.

I jammed the wedge of the pry bar into the seam between the two gate leaves. Bracing my boots against the frozen gravel, I threw my entire body weight into the lever.

The iron shrieked in protest. My shoulder burned as the cold metal pushed back, fighting me with the full weight of eighty tons of packed snow.

"Come on," I grunted through my teeth. "Move, you stubborn piece of junk."

I dug my heels in and heaved with everything in my spine.

The left gate panel shifted an inch inward, the heavy steel hasps groaning as they slipped into alignment.

With my free hand, I swung the forged screw clamp over the aligned lugs. I spun the threaded T-handle with fast, hard twists of my wrist. The steel jaws bit deep into the iron hasps, metal biting metal, locking the two halves together in a vice-like grip.

The shuddering stopped. The gate held.

I stood there for three ragged breaths, the cold air scraping like sandpaper in my throat. My forearm muscles twitched with exhaustion, but the gate was stable.

I took the heavy transport chain, wrapped it four times around the center stanchion posts, and dogged the grab hooks tight through the links. It was an ugly, brutal field repair. It would look like a disaster to the resort inspectors, but it would hold until I could bring up an oxy-acetylene torch and weld a permanent steel brace across the seam.

With the immediate collapse prevented, my mind snapped back to the melted padlock.

Who had done this?

Danika and Levskor were currently trying to ruin each other in public. Danika claimed Levskor's private contractors were deliberately neglecting routine maintenance to drive down the resort's asset value before a corporate buyout. Levskor claimed Danika was skimming season-pass revenues to fund unauthorized slope extensions.

They were both arrogant, stubborn, and constantly stressed. But neither of them was stupid enough to melt an avalanche gate with combat-grade acid and trigger a disaster that would shut down the entire mountain for a week.

This was not owner sabotage. This was professional.

I stepped back from the barrier, scanning the fresh snow on the shoulder of the access road.

The wind had scoured most of the asphalt down to black ice, but near the rock drainage ditch, where the vertical granite wall blocked the northern gusts, the snow remained soft and powdery.

There were boot prints.

I walked over, crouching low to inspect the impressions in the drift.

They were fresh. The edges of the tread were crisp and sharp, showing no signs of morning sublimation or wind-rounding. The boot was a tactical winter lug, size eleven or twelve, with a reinforced vibram sole and a distinct cross-hatch pattern across the heel. It was the footprint of someone who spent serious time in high-altitude terrain, carrying heavy gear.

The tracks led down from the rocky scree above the gate, stopped at the lock housing, and then circled back toward the drainage culvert.

I followed the trail with my eyes.

Near the concrete lip of the culvert, half-buried under a lip of windblown crust, something caught the morning light. It gave off a dull, amber glint.

I took three careful steps forward and dropped to one knee in the drift.

Lying in the snow was a heavy glass vial, about the size of my palm. The amber glass was thick, reinforced with a fluted silicone grip ring designed to keep it from slipping out of wet gloves in freezing weather. The screw top was fitted with a needle-point Teflon applicator nozzle.

I picked it up by the base, careful not to touch the crusty residue around the nozzle.

Inside the vial, a thumbnail of bright yellow paste remained. It gave off that same sharp, nauseating stench of sulfur and acid. On the base of the glass, stamped into the molded rim, was a tiny lot number: NX-440-B. No brand name. No commercial manufacturer seal. Just an industrial batch code and a hazard diamond with a black skull.

My pulse jumped.

This was not a careless mistake. Someone had knelt right here in the dark, carefully applied four milliliters of reactive paste to the tumblers of Gate Seven, and left the barrier to collapse under the morning snow load.

If I had stayed in my warm bed for another twenty minutes, the gate would have blown wide open. The access road would have been buried under ten feet of slab. The morning supply trucks carrying diesel and food to the high lodge would have been turned back, and the resort's opening weekend would have been completely ruined.

I tucked the amber vial into the padded interior pocket of my canvas parka and zipped the brass zipper securely shut.

This was proof. Not a vague suspicion or a maintenance excuse, but hard physical evidence of targeted sabotage. If Danika and Levskor wanted to scream at each other about lost revenue, I was going to set this little glass bottle on their polished conference table and make them look at reality.

I stood up, brushing the frozen crust from my work pants.

The sky above the jagged peaks of the western ridge was turning a bruised, cold violet. Dawn was coming, but there was no warmth in it. The whole valley felt trapped under an iron dome of dry, freezing air.

I turned back toward my utility truck, intending to drive down to the lower pump shack and call the maintenance depot on the hardwired copper landline.

Then the iron gate screamed.

It was not the wind. It was not the groan of shifting snowpack.

CLANG. CLANG. CLANG.

A heavy, violent pounding echoed off the granite walls of the narrow pass.

I froze mid-stride, my hand dropping instinctively to the steel pry bar resting against my hip.

The sound was coming from the other side of Gate Seven. The closed side. The side that opened into the sheer, unpatrolled drop of the North Chute, where no skier or maintenance tech had any legal business being before eight in the morning.

CLANG. CLANG.

A heavy fist, encased in a hard-knuckled tactical glove, slammed against the galvanized mesh. The entire iron frame rattled in its concrete footing.

"Hey!" a voice barked through the steel slats.

It was a man's voice. Deep, rough from the altitude, and furious.

"Unlock the damn latch!" he shouted, rattling the iron with both hands. "Open the gate before this whole chute comes down on my head!"

I took two slow, deliberate steps toward the shuddering barrier, gripping the cold iron bar until my knuckles turned white.

Through the galvanized iron mesh of the gate, in the dim violet shadows of the chute, a pair of dark, sharp eyes stared straight back at me.

I did not move. I did not reach for my keys.

"Who the hell are you?" I demanded.

The man on the other side slammed his palm against the iron mesh once more.

"The guy who's going to freeze to death if you don't turn that key," he snapped. "Now open it."

I looked at his tactical gloves, then down at the heavy pack strapped across his broad shoulders, and finally at the locked iron barrier keeping him on the other side of my mountain.

"Give me one good reason," I said.

⚑ Report chapter


Tip: use the ← and → keys to move between chapters.

About the author

Peregrine Carrow

Peregrine Carrow writes fantasy about old empires and new heroes, choices that shape kingdoms and quests with real costs. The voice is vivid and adventurous. The focus stays on character: what people want, what it…

More stories by Peregrine Carrow »

Comments

Loading comments…