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Chapter 10

Oct 2, 2026 · 1,685 words · 8 min read

Faris waited until the entire party was clear. They retrieved the brass plumb bob, untied the guide line from the limestone horn, and stepped across the narrow gap in two quick, balanced strides.

The upper terrace, known in the old route charts as the Falcon's Bench, was a wide shelf of solid limestone sixty paces long and twenty paces deep. It was sheltered from the caustic thermal updrafts by a towering overhang of dark basalt that jutted out over the gorge like the prow of a river barge.

Here, two hundred feet above the floor of the Sunken Notch, the air was slightly cooler. The fine white dust still hung in the atmosphere like a luminous fog, but the high shelf sat above the dense, suffocating cloud that choked the bottom of the canyon.

The moment the last survivor cleared the overhang, the caravan collapsed.

Men and women dropped onto the gray limestone where they stood, leaning their backs against the solid rock wall. Their breath came in ragged, wheezing gasps behind their greasy masks. Several porters tore off their outer boots to check their feet, wincing as they peeled away wool wraps soaked in sweat and crushed chalk.

Faris walked the length of the bench, checking the picket lines.

The eleven remaining oxen had been tethered in two rows against the inner cliff face, their heads tied low to prevent them from tossing their horns against the rock ceiling. Roshan was already moving among them with a wooden scraper, checking the canvas pack-trees for shifted loads and clearing alkaline crust from their nostrils.

When Faris approached, Roshan wiped his brow with the back of a leather-gloved hand, leaving a greasy smear of gray tallow across his forehead.

"Nevan's hands are scraped raw," Roshan murmured, his voice keeping to the low, rasping pitch they had used since entering the acoustic danger zone. "Baraz has friction burns on his palms from the drag-rope, but he'll have the grip back in three days if Sabiha keeps the vinegar wraps on them."

"And the beasts?" Faris asked quietly.

"Eleven sound heads," Roshan said. He gestured with two calloused fingers toward the empty space at the end of the picket line, his mouth curling into a dry, crooked grimace. "Number Nine was always the meanest bastard in the yard. Bit three apprentices in the staging yard at Marzhad, kicked a water cask to splinters two weeks back, and now he's gone and carried ten gallons of our best river water straight to hell with him."

Faris felt a tight knot in their chest loosen slightly, replaced by the dull, familiar ache of exhaustion. "He took the load cleanly. If he'd rolled inward, he would have broken Nevan's hips and taken Ox Ten with him."

"Aye," Roshan agreed, his tone turning sober as he ran his palm down the flank of the nearest draft beast. "You made the cut true. No driver in the guild could have done it cleaner, Faris."

Faris did not linger on the praise. They turned toward the center of the terrace, where Soraya-shah had laid out her slate inventory tablet upon a flat slab of limestone.

The merchant appraiser was sitting with her back straight, her ironwood stick resting across her knees. She had pulled her grease mask down beneath her chin, revealing the deep lines of fatigue around her mouth and the white streaks of dried alkaline sweat caked along her jawline. Beside her, Baraz and Sabiha were setting down the salvaged containers from the surviving pack beasts.

Faris walked over and stood before the stone slab. "What is the count, Master Soraya?"

Soraya-shah picked up her chalk piece, tapped the slate once with a sharp click, and looked up at Faris with an unreadable expression.

"We began the climb with three hundred and forty gallons distributed across twelve pack trees," Soraya said, her voice steady and precise, entirely devoid of the panic that still gripped the porters ten yards away. "Ox Nine carried two five-gallon hide bladders and four crates of split peas. That leaves us with three hundred and thirty gallons across twenty ash casks and forty-six bladders, and four fewer crates of hard rations."

"Three hundred and thirty gallons for forty people and eleven beasts," Faris said, doing the arithmetic instantly in their head. "At two pints a day per person and three gallons per ox, we have roughly eight days of survival water if we maintain strict marching discipline."

"The water is not what will kill us by tomorrow noon, Faris-ran," Soraya-shah said quietly.

She laid the chalk down on the slate. She pointed a thin, age-spotted finger toward the teamsters resting against the cliff wall.

"Ox Nine was carrying forty pounds of split peas and ten gallons of water," Soraya said. "A serious loss of travel rations, but manageable. What is not manageable is the air we are breathing."

Sabiha, who was kneeling nearby tending to Daryush's sling, looked up with wide, frightened eyes. She pulled at the coarse linen mask covering her nose and mouth.

"Master Soraya," Sabiha stammered, her voice shaking behind the cloth. "We still have the grease masks Faris made from the trade linens. They kept the dust out through the climb."

"Look at your fingers, girl," Soraya-shah said, without turning her head. "Look at the grease on your knuckles."

Sabiha looked down. The afternoon heat, trapped beneath the rock overhang, had begun to warm the air on the bench. The sheep tallow and axle grease impregnated into the three-layer linen masks had softened, turning translucent and slick. Fine white powder from the atmosphere was already clinging to the melted fat, forming a gray, curdled paste along the edges of the cloth where it met the skin.

"The linen holds for now because we are sitting still in the shade," Soraya-shah said, her gaze returning to Faris's face. "Within two hours of heavy climbing under direct sun, that tallow melts into thin oil. It runs down your chin, it opens the weave of the coarse linen, and the alkaline marl turns the hot fat into caustic soap against your skin. Every bolt of factory-treated silk was buried in the lead wagon with Master Ormaz. We have no silk respirators, our salvaged mutton tallow is spent, and you cannot recharge forty masks with dry linen alone."

Silence settled over the terrace, thick and suffocating as the dust itself.

Faris looked past Soraya-shah toward the edge of the Falcon's Bench. Through the gap in the limestone parapet, the white canyon floor lay four hundred feet below, shrouded in its perpetual veil of alkaline haze. Somewhere down in that caustic basin, half-buried under the fallen shale slab and poisonous powder, lay the broken body of Ox Nine.

Kian-dar walked over from the cliff edge, his footsteps completely silent upon the stone. He stopped two paces from the slate tablet, his arms folded loosely within his gray sleeves.

"The trail ahead does not widen," Kian-dar said, his calm voice cutting through the tension like cold water on hot iron. "From the Falcon's Bench to the High Notch is four miles of exposed shelf. The sun will strike this face in two hours. When the rock heats, the updraft from the canyon basin will carry three times the dust we encountered on the lower traverse."

He looked down at Faris's knife, still stained with crushed hemp fibers.

"You saved two men and kept the shelf from breaking beneath our feet," Kian-dar said softly. "It was a skilled cut. But without thick rendered fat or heavy barrier salves to replenish these melting masks, forty of your people will choke on caustic dust before tomorrow noon."

Soraya-shah picked up her chalk again and drew a single, heavy line across the bottom of the slate.

"You are the master of this road now, Faris-ran," she said, her voice dropping into a quiet, cutting register that carried only to Faris's ears. "Your father would have sacrificed the two teamsters before he lost a single pack beast, knowing every carcass holds leather, sinew, and sixty pounds of solid tallow. You chose the men. Now tell us how forty people cross four miles of boiling alkaline dust when the fat on their faces runs dry."

Faris stood motionless beneath the shadow of the basalt overhang.

The weight of forty lives pressed down upon their shoulders, heavier than the two-thousand-gallon cistern, colder than the chasm yawning at their feet. They did not look away from Soraya-shah's slate. They reached down, touched the smooth horn hilt of the skinning knife at their hip, and looked out over the edge of the precipice toward the white basin below.

The beast had fallen straight. It lay beneath the sheer drop of the Devil's Rib, pinned in the narrow shadow of the lower fissure where the dust had not yet drifted deep.

"Roshan," Faris said, their voice low, measured, and stripped of all doubt.

The old teamster straightened immediately from the pack line. "Aye, Faris?"

"Uncoil seventy-five fathoms of the four-ply haulage rope," Faris said, turning back toward the shaded terrace where the forty survivors lay resting against the stone. "Check every strand for friction burns, and lay out two iron grapples on the canvas."

Soraya-shah looked down at her slate tablet, where the chalk line divided the living from the lost. She did not argue. For the first time since the mountain fell, the old appraiser simply closed her hand over her ironwood stick and remained silent.

Faris sat down upon a flat boulder at the terrace lip, unbuckled their split-leather knife sheath, and laid the carbon-steel blade across their knees. The cutting edge was notched and gray with crushed hemp oil, dulled from saving two men who now sat breathing quietly in the shadow behind them.

Across the gorge, the noon heat began to shimmer over the white expanse of the basin, burying the road under four hundred feet of silence. Faris drew their oilstone from their pouch, placed the wet stone against the nicked steel, and began the slow, rhythmic work of sharpening the blade for the descent.

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Clement L. Aubert

Clement L. Aubert writes fantasy about choices that shape kingdoms, quests with real costs and unlikely allies. The voice is brisk and inventive. The focus stays on character: what people want, what it costs, and what…

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