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Chapter 1

Oct 12, 2026 · 1,134 words · 5 min read

Nobody stole an eight-hundred-foot war-canoe carved from a single primeval cedar unless they intended to run it off the edge of the world. Donnchadh MacAoidh had his shoulder braced hard against the tiller beam of the Sgàth-Bhràghaid, listening to the mountain tear itself apart around them, and his only complaint was that the current moved too slow.

"Mooring pin three is shearing!" Muircheartach bellowed from the midship deck. The massive brawler had both thick arms wrapped around a braided hemp hawser, muscles bunching under grease-stained bear hide as he wrestled the strain of thousands of tons of shifting cedar. "Donnchadh! If that line snaps before the nose clears the dock slip, it'll whip through the bench-deck and take every oar with it!"

"Then let it snap!" Donnchadh yelled back. Spray from the black river sluice lashed across his brow, cold as melted slate. "Kick the retaining wedge! We need every ounce of headwater behind our stern, or we hit the cataract below forty knots and drop like an anvil!"

High on the forward lookout spar, two hundred and fifty yards ahead in the gloom, the lean silhouette of Beathag NicAonghais swung against the cross-stay. The sharp snap of her heavy bowcord cut through the roar, and a breath later an iron lantern shattered against the clan garrison's crane tower above the cavern dock, dousing their pursuit in pitch.

"Drop gate is falling!" she called out, her voice cutting clean through the hydro-shock rumble. "Five seconds to the overhang!"

Donnchadh dug his bare heels into the notched deck planks. Beneath his calloused palms, the fifty-foot cedar sweep kicked like a trapped river shark. The river had swallowed the mountain's drainage tunnel three centuries ago, gouging a vertical abyss that plummeted straight into the subterranean depths. Clan enforcers called it a death ditch. Donnchadh called it the only road wide enough to float their prize.

A translucent pulse of blue script rippled across the damp timber near his knuckles:

[Wild-Torrent Matrix: Inactive]

[Current Hull Speed: 26 Knots (Threshold: 40 Knots)]

[Kinetic Skills: Locked]

"Give me the drop," Donnchadh muttered, tasting river salt and pine resin. "Just give me the drop."

A frantic scream bubbled up through the bilge grates beneath his boots.

"The lower ports are blowing out!" Fionnghal’s voice bounced off the cedar ribs, shrill with panic. "The sluice water is up to my collarbone, Donnchadh! I'm holding four tons of counterweight with two bronze levers and a prayer! We're sinking before we even hit the chute!"

"Hold the trim, Fionnghal!" Donnchadh shouted through the floorboards. "If you drop those ballast levers, our snout dips into the drop and we roll end over end!"

"I hate this boat!" came the muffled reply from the dark hold. "I hate every foot of this overgrown log!"

A sound like an iron ball striking an anvil cracked across the cavern. The last hawser parted under five hundred tons of hydraulic suction. The recoil snapped the thick rope through the dock pylons, splintering the clan watch-station into kindling as the Sgàth-Bhràghaid broke free.

The monolithic canoe surged forward into the main chute.

The water here was no longer a flat surface. It tilted downward at a thirty-degree angle, slick and black, funneled between jagged walls of wet basalt. Gravity caught the enormous hollowed cedar trunk. Air screamed through the prow rigging. The bench-deck shuddered as the hull skimmed over the frothing crests.

[Current Hull Speed: 34 Knots]

[Velocity Rising...]

"Brace the benches!" Muircheartach roared, throwing himself across the central cargo box to pin the spare sweep oars with his torso.

Ahead, the river simply vanished.

The cavern floor sheared away into a yawning black gulf. A deafening roar rose from the depths—a subterranean waterfall plunging into the dark unknown, framed by a pair of jagged rock teeth protruding from the canyon lips. If the dreadnought entered the drop nose-first at an angle, the port flank would clip the lower fang and shear the hull in half.

Donnchadh did not haul back to brake. He did the opposite.

He threw his entire torso over the master sweep, wedging his right boot against the heavy bronze pivot socket. Instead of fighting the river's rush, he leaned into the lateral torque, catching the violent curl of the starboard eddy against the sweep's broad cedar blade.

The kickback nearly dislocated his shoulder. The wood groaned under impossible shear stress. But the Dreadnought responded to the sudden pivot. The eight-hundred-foot hull broke its straight plunge, kicking its stern wide in a controlled, screaming drift across the mouth of the chute.

The port bow swung clear of the basalt spire with less than an arm's span to spare. Rock scraped cedar with a shriek of burning pitch, throwing showers of pale shavings into the night spray.

Then the world dropped away beneath them.

The dreadnought cleared the lip, vaulting out into the subterranean abyss.

For two suspended heartbeats, there was no water under the keel. There was only free fall, the howling dark, and the weightless leap of eight hundred feet of carved timber hanging in open air.

The matrix interface flared brilliant cobalt across Donnchadh's vision:

[Threshold Reached: 46 Knots]

[Wild-Torrent Matrix: Online]

[Calculated Mass-to-Drop Velocity: S-Rank Arc]

[Skill Unlocked: Drift Velocity I]

[Drift Velocity I: Dynamic rudder response increased by 15% while exceeding 40 knots. Hull drag on lateral slides converts directly to forward kinetic thrust.]

A wash of invigorating warmth flooded down Donnchadh's arms, stiffening his grip against the sweep as the rudder blade bit into the sheer wind. He threw his head back and laughed, the sound swallowed by the thunder of the chasm.

"Hold on to your teeth, lads!" Donnchadh shouted.

The Sgàth-Bhràghaid met the roaring plunge pool three hundred feet below with a concussive boom. A wall of white foam erupted higher than the mastheads, but the sleek, curved cedar hull did not dig in. Powered by [Drift Velocity], the massive dreadnought planed instantly atop the churning subterranean torrent, converting the impact into blistering forward speed.

From down in the flooded ballast trench, a sputtering cough echoed through the grates.

"My boots are full of silt," Fionnghal groaned, his voice shaking. "We survived. Tell me we survived."

"We survived the drop, little dredger!" Muircheartach called down with a booming guffaw, dusting splintered bark from his beard. "Now we just have to survive the rest of the mountain!"

High on the prow cross-spar, Beathag swung around in the rigging to point her bow toward the stern. Donnchadh looked back over the trailing rudder blade.

Through the curtains of rising mist, sixty yards behind the rushing canoe, the churning rapids bulged upward. A massive crest of armored bone and glistening plate-scales breached the foam, twice as wide as the dreadnought's beam, glowing with the dull, hungry phosphor of the deep abyss.

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K.S. Chandler

K.S. Chandler writes LitRPG and progression fantasy about leveling that costs something, crunchy stat systems and tactical fights. The voice is fast and tactical. Every series is built for binge reading, with arcs that…

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