Odds of Return by Ignatius Sorrell

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Chapter 10

Oct 15, 2026 · 1,758 words · 8 min read

Renyke's shop had two locks and no window on the alley side, and Dorvan had knocked on that door at plenty of bad hours before, but never twice in the same day. He knocked now, with his knuckles instead of his usual two taps and a wait, because his usual signal was for jobs, and this wasn't a job.

The bolt scraped back before he'd finished the second knock.

"You're bleeding," Renyke said, looking him over in the lamp-crack of the open door. "Or you're not, and this is worse."

"I'm not bleeding."

"Then it's worse. Bleeding I know how to fix." She squinted at him a beat longer, unimpressed by whatever she found. "This, I'm going to need the pot for." She stepped back to let him in, tying her robe with the brisk finality of someone closing a ledger for the night. "Sit. Don't touch the pot, it's not for you."

He took the stool by her workbench, because there was nowhere else in the cramped front room that wasn't stacked with things waiting to be someone else's. Renyke's whole trade was other people's leftovers, sorted and re-homed for a cut, and Dorvan had spent more hours in this room than in his own. He'd also been thrown out of it twice, once for touching the pot. He decided, on balance, not to remind her.

"A man stopped me at the rail tonight," he said. "Wanted to know if I'd heard of a name — the Kórnyász Circle. I told him I hadn't, and I was going to ask you if you—"

Renyke didn't sit. She stood by the stove with her arms crossed, the firelight cutting the lines in her face deeper than they were.

"You're not asking about a name," she said. "You're asking what happens if you say yes to them."

Dorvan opened his mouth to correct her, found nothing better to put in its place, and closed it again.

"That's what I thought," Renyke said. "Sit up straight and tell me why a man they'd have no reason to look twice at has one of their people cornering him at the rail tonight. A sweeper told me, before you ask. Man in a gray coat, talking low, not letting you walk off."

"I didn't know you had sweepers reporting to you."

"I pay three of them. It's where the good salvage comes from." She let that sit a beat, then added, flatter, "Don't change the subject on me, Dorvan. I'm too old and you're too obvious."

"I'm not obvious. I'm careful."

"You're careful the way a cat is quiet. Right up until it isn't, and then everyone in the house knows exactly whose fault the broken plate is."

He ran the numbers the way he'd run them at the rail an hour ago. He'd already put the meeting on the table himself; there was no walking it back, and no shrinking it either, not with a sweeper's account sitting right beside his own. A vague question about the Circle's reach would only earn him the same flat stare he was getting now, and cost him a second try at the real one. That left exactly one move: give her the fact of what he was and hold back the how of it, the same trade Talányi had made him at the rail, except this time he got to pick where the line sat.

She was watching him work through all of that, arms still crossed, and he could see her getting ready to knock down whatever half-answer he landed on. It cost him something to realize how tired he was of doing this to people who'd earned better.

"They know things about me they shouldn't be able to know," he said instead. "Not guessed. Known. Details I never told anyone. Not you, not Ilka, not a soul."

"How known."

"Known like they watched me live through the same stretch of nights more than once." He made himself keep going before he could take the easy exit back into vagueness. "I don't just remember what went wrong the last time, Renyke. I remember it because I was there for it, some way I can't explain, and the man in the gray coat has watched me be there for it. Enough of it that he stopped guessing and started saying it to my face."

He'd started to say more — the shape of it, how he'd know the exact board a floor plank would creak under, how a ledger page sat behind a false drawer front before his hand had ever touched the real one — and heard himself starting to explain the mechanism instead of the fact, which was exactly the thing he couldn't afford to hand anyone, not even her. He cut it there.

"That's the whole confession," he said. "I'm not going to make it longer just because you're waiting for more."

Renyke didn't move for several seconds. The pot on the stove ticked as it cooled. When she finally spoke, her voice had none of the dryness it usually carried, which frightened him more than if she'd shouted.

"I've known for a while you're carrying something you shouldn't be able to carry," she said. "I didn't ask, because I've buried three friends who found things they shouldn't have been able to find, and not one of them told me until it was too late to matter." She looked at him steadily. "You're the first one who told me anyway. I'd rather have it than keep guessing wrong."

"That's not an answer about the Circle."

"No," she agreed. "It's the price of getting one." She turned, took two cups down from the shelf, and poured from the pot she'd told him not to touch, which he understood was the closest she came to saying she was glad he'd come. "Sit still. This is going to take longer than you want it to."

She told it like she told everything, in short flat sentences with no ornament wasted on him.

"There was a fighter, before your time on the boards. Ferenc Lakatosy. They called him the Latch, because his grip held longer than his Tell said it should, and nobody could pry a hold off him once he'd taken it. Won an upset that made every odds-broker in the city look stupid in the same week. The Circle took an interest." She wrapped both hands around her cup. "That was the last good week of his life."

"What did they do to him?"

"Nothing you could point to. No mark, no wound, no charge filed against him anywhere." Her mouth flattened. "His corner man stopped getting offers. His usual sparring hall started booking his slot to someone else, always by accident, always with an apology. The brackets kept sliding him into fights that didn't build his name. Two years of that, and the man who beat the odds of the century was working a fish stall, and half the boardside couldn't have told you why he'd stopped, only that he had."

"That's not a punishment. That's just bad luck."

"That's what they want it to look like." Renyke set her cup down without drinking from it. "They don't take your life, Dorvan. They take your future out of other people's hands, so gently that nobody involved ever has to feel like they did it on purpose. No enemy to fight. No debt to pay off. Just a life that quietly stops going anywhere, and everyone around you agreeing it was always going to."

Dorvan sat with that longer than he wanted to. He thought of Ilka's bracket sliding wrong, of a corner man's offers drying up one polite excuse at a time, and understood for the first time exactly what shape a threat against her would take if the Circle ever decided to make one. Not a knife. A slow erosion nobody could name in a report.

"Where is he now?" Dorvan asked. "Lakatosy."

"Still in the city. Still breathing, which is more than some manage." Renyke dug through a crate behind her counter and came up with a cracked, brown-inked betting stub, Lakatosy's name and the absurd odds against him still legible across the top. "Works a fish stall by the third canal bridge now. Kept this because nobody ever came to collect on it. Take it. Or go smell like herring and hear it from the man himself."

Dorvan angled it toward the lamp. Forty-to-one against, in a hand that had clearly enjoyed writing it. Somebody had made a fortune betting on Lakatosy that week, and it hadn't kept the man in a ring long enough to spend it. He read that twice before he understood it wasn't a clue. It was a warning shaped like a receipt.

"They let him keep winning right up until the day they didn't," he said.

"That's the part people miss. They're patient. You'll want to remember that before you decide you can out-wait them."

Dorvan pocketed the stub, in the same pocket that never held anything he meant to give back, and didn't have anything dry left to say about it.

"He told me it was sworn duty," Dorvan said. "Not payment. No coin, no warrant. Just what they know about who I'd hate to see hurt."

"That tracks," Renyke said. "They never once paid Lakatosy a copper either."

"Then you'd better learn their price before they're the ones who get to name it." She picked her cup back up, drank, and didn't look at him while she said the rest. "I'm not coming with you when you go answer him. This isn't a lock I can pick for you, and I've buried enough people who thought company would help."

Dorvan turned Talányi's own words over on the walk to the door: a favor, freely given. Freely given meant the giver named the shape of it, not the man doing the asking. Show up already holding something small and closed, and there'd be nothing left for the Circle to name for him instead. Against whatever slow erosion the Circle had in mind for people like Lakatosy, it came down to one sentence he could say instead of yes, and for tonight that would have to be enough.

Renyke didn't offer to walk him back to the rail, and she didn't linger over the goodbye either. She saw him to the door, threw the bolt behind him before he'd finished the first step down to the alley, and left him to cross the rest of it alone.

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Ignatius Sorrell

Ignatius Sorrell writes LitRPG and progression fantasy about underdogs who out-think the System, tactical fights and leveling that costs something. The voice is fast and tactical. Chapters favor momentum over recap, and…

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