Odds of Return by Ignatius Sorrell

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Chapter 7

Oct 9, 2026 · 2,969 words · 13 min read

The fourth time Dorvan let himself into Rennő Halmasy's office, his fingers found the loose nail under the sash in the dark without needing to search for it, the same catch, the same give, muscle memory doing in three seconds what it had taken him a full minute to solve the very first time. The wood itself reset with every dawn same as everything else. His hands didn't.

That was the difference this time. He wasn't hunting. He was auditing.

Three deaths in, Dorvan had learned the shape of his own mistakes better than he'd ever learned the shape of Halmasy's plan: he panicked at the size of the thing and grabbed whatever piece was closest, the referee, the wraps, one lever at a time, like pulling a single brick out of a wall and being surprised when the wall didn't fall. This loop he wasn't grabbing anything. He was building a wall of his own, brick by brick, in places Halmasy would never think to look and the Circuit's boards would never think to ask about.

He eased the window up a hand's width, waited on the sill for the creak to finish settling into the dark, and went in low.

The office hadn't changed. It never did, not on this end of things — the same low writing desk crowded with correspondence, the same iron cabinet against the far wall with a lock Dorvan had learned to read like a second alphabet, the same inner door at the back that looked like a closet and wasn't, behind which Halmasy kept the board no clerk or client was meant to see. Dorvan had gotten a look at that board three times now, each time through a few stolen seconds of lamplight before the door swung shut. He didn't need to relearn the room. He needed to know what had changed on that board since the last time he'd stood here, in a night none of these papers remembered happening.

He went to the cabinet first, not the board. The ledger page he wanted — the one naming Ratsó Berényi, dated and priced — wasn't in his coat anymore. It had never carried across a reset; he'd proven that twice already, watching it vanish out of his own pocket between one dawn and the next like it had never been stolen at all. So he stole it again. Second nature this time, no fumbling with the pick, the tumblers giving up their order in under a minute because his hands remembered the sequence even when his coat didn't remember the page.

But he didn't stop there, and he didn't take everything either. Three loops of watching Halmasy work had taught him what the man actually needed on his desk to run his week, and what he only kept for his own satisfaction. Dorvan lifted the Berényi page, a second sheet listing dates and sums for a fronted account he hadn't had time to trace before, and left the rest of the drawer exactly as he'd found it, corners aligned, dust undisturbed, nothing to tell a man who'd never lived through this night before that anyone had been here twice.

That was the trick of it, he thought, easing the drawer shut. Halmasy would wake up and never know this was the fourth version of his own office he'd unknowingly hosted. Only Dorvan carried the count. Which meant only Dorvan had to be careful not to leave marks that a first-timer's eyes would read as wrong.

The inner door was the last thing he checked, easing it open on hinges he'd already learned not to trust past the first inch of swing. The board inside told him nothing new. Same hand, same chalk, same line under GRAND DRAW – GEAR CHECK reading TELL, PLATFORM, PUBLIC, the entry that had stood there unchanged through both of the last two loops he'd gotten close enough to read it. Dorvan read it twice anyway, the way Renyke had taught him to read anything that mattered — not for what it said, but for whether it had been said the same way before — and eased the door shut behind him, latch catching soft.

He was out the window before the guard's second circuit of the alley, the ledger page folded flat against his ribs, and for the first time in four dawns he let himself feel something closer to satisfaction than dread. Not because he'd won anything. Because for once he hadn't had to improvise to get it.

Renyke's shop smelled the way it always did at that hour, tallow and old leather and the mineral bite of the polish she used on fight gear she no longer fought in. She was hunched over a boot sole with an awl when Dorvan came in, and she didn't look up.

"You're back," she said. "Didn't think I'd told you anything worth coming back for."

"You told me the gear roster's wrong." He set the folded sheet on her bench, his own careful copy of the east-gate board, two senior names struck and Farkas Dunszky's slotted in above them like an afterthought nobody had bothered to explain. "Two names pulled without cause, a man nobody's ever heard of slotted into the one match that matters most this Draw Week. You said it yourself. Fixers don't touch the Tell. They touch what walks up to it."

Renyke set the awl down and looked at the sheet, then at him, the way she looked at a fighter's stance before she decided whether the fight was worth her time. "I don't remember saying that to you."

"You did." He kept his voice even. It was true enough, in the loop's own crooked arithmetic; it just hadn't happened in any version of this week that still existed anywhere but his own head. "Last time we talked gear."

"Must've been a good talk. You've got it memorized better than I do." She picked the sheet back up, read it again, slower. Something in her face went still and careful, the look she got when a fighter's numbers didn't add up to the fighter standing in front of her. "This is real. This isn't you guessing."

"I don't guess."

"No," Renyke said. "You never have. That's what worries me about you lately, boy. You used to guess plenty. Now you walk in here sounding like a man reading off a second Tell nobody's chalked up yet." She set the sheet down and didn't push it back at him, which from Renyke was as close to agreement as a person got. "What do you want me to do with it?"

"File it." He'd thought about this part longer than any of the rest. A complaint from him meant nothing — an unregistered nobody with no Tell, no standing, no reason the Ring would take seriously over a licensed broker's clean paperwork. A complaint from Renyke Vaszody, corner-medic to half the boards for twenty years, meant something else entirely. "With the Ring officials, not me. In your name. I want them looking at that roster before match day, and I want it on record that they were told, whether they act on it or not."

"And if they ask me how I know."

"You read patterns for a living. Tell them you read one."

Renyke's mouth did something that wasn't quite a smile. "You're getting good at this. Getting people to hand you what you want and thinking it was their own idea." She folded the sheet into her apron pocket, deliberate, final. "I'll file it this afternoon. Don't thank me. I'm not doing it for you, I'm doing it because if that roster's wrong and something happens to a fighter under my old sanction number, that's mine to answer for too." She picked the awl back up, already done with him. "Go bother someone whose job it is to be bothered."

Detre Konszaby's job, as far as Detre Konszaby was concerned, was to be bothered by exactly nothing, because there was nothing about a Circuit Tell reading that a man of his integrity could get wrong. Dorvan had learned across two loops that this belief was the single most reliable lever in Kordava, sturdier than any lock, and he'd come to the boardside pavilion that afternoon with no tools but a question.

He found Detre between readings, chalk dust on his sleeves, holding court for two junior clerks who had clearly heard this story before and were too underpaid to say so.

"—and I said to the man, I don't care whose coin bought your silence, the numbers get read as they stand or they don't get read by me at all—"

"Detre." Dorvan let himself drift into the edge of the group like he belonged there, which by now he mostly did; three loops of manufactured familiarity had bought him that much. "Question for you. Professional, not personal."

Detre's chest came up a half inch, the way it always did at the word professional. "Ask it."

"Say a fighter's gear gets swapped during the Tell itself. Not before, not after. While you're standing right there reading her numbers to the whole crowd." Dorvan shrugged, easy, like he was only thinking out loud. "You'd catch that, wouldn't you? A man doing it right in front of you?"

The two junior clerks went quiet in a way that told Dorvan they'd both had the same thought and neither had been fool enough to say it aloud. Detre's face did something complicated, pride and doubt arm-wrestling behind his eyes.

"Of course I'd catch it," he said, too fast.

"Would you, though." Dorvan let a beat sit there, unhurried. "You've got a hundred people watching your mouth and nobody watching her hands. A man good enough to fix a match wouldn't be clumsy about it. He'd do it while your back's half turned to call the crowd."

"My back is never half turned."

"I'm just saying. If someone wanted to try it — Ilka Bodrozsa's match, say, her numbers are the ones everyone's watching hardest — that's exactly the moment they'd pick. Big crowd, big distraction, and the one man whose job is honesty standing there not actually looking at her gear at all. Just her stats."

Detre's jaw worked. Dorvan watched him arrive, unassisted, at the exact conclusion Dorvan had spent two loops trying to force on other men by proof and evidence and none of it sticking half this well. Wounded pride did in thirty seconds what a stolen ledger page hadn't managed in three deaths.

"That," Detre announced, loud enough that the two clerks flinched, "will not happen under my Tell. I will personally inspect Ilka Bodrozsa's gear myself, hand to wrap, before I read a single number of hers aloud. In front of the whole boardside, so nobody says after the fact that Detre Konszaby let a fix walk past him in his own Draw Week." He said it like a proclamation, chalk dust puffing off his sleeve when he thumped his own chest for emphasis, and the two clerks exchanged a look Dorvan chose not to read too closely.

"You'll want witnesses to that," Dorvan said.

"I have witnesses." Detre gestured expansively at his own clerks, who nodded with the enthusiasm of men agreeing to something that was now, officially, no longer their problem to prevent and entirely their problem to remember. "It's decided. Written down, if you like — I'll have it in the day's log within the hour."

Dorvan didn't smile until he was three streets clear of the pavilion. It wasn't a Restitution click, nothing the strange arithmetic of his Path would ever register as a return, but it was real in every way that mattered: a witnessed vow, from a man who'd rather die than break his own word in public, that Ilka's gear would be checked by human eyes at the one moment Dorvan had never once managed to reach in time.

Three loops he'd been the only man in Kordava who knew what was coming. Tonight there were two more who'd act on it without knowing why, and neither of them would forget by morning, because the Gyontő hadn't tolled yet.

He spent the evening on the last brick.

The wall-gap behind the rain barrel two streets from Halmasy's office had already proven itself three times over — the lockpick he'd hidden there in the very first loop had survived three folds undisturbed, a small stupid fact that had taught him more about how this world actually worked than anything Renyke or Halmasy's ledger ever had. An item stashed outside anyone's control held. It didn't care how many times the world reset around it, because it wasn't the world's to reset. It was his.

He wrote it out plain, no ciphers, no cleverness — the referee's name and price, the gear-inspector roster and the struck names, Dunszky's face described as close as he could manage, the words watch the wraps during the Tell, not before underlined twice — folded the page around a second pick he'd bought that morning with coin from nobody's pocket but his own, and wedged the little parcel deep into the gap where stone met stone, below where the barrel's iron band would hide it from any eye that wasn't looking on purpose.

If this loop broke too, if the Gyontő tolled again and the world folded back to a dawn where none of today had happened, the parcel would still be here. Renyke's memory wouldn't be, and Detre's vow wouldn't be, and every clever thing he'd built with living, breathing people who trusted him for reasons they wouldn't remember trusting him for would be gone with the dawn. But the paper would hold. The pick would hold. A version of himself with no other advantage left would still be able to reach into this gap and find a hand reaching back.

It wasn't much. It felt, standing there in the last of the light with his palm flat against cold stone, like the first thing in four dawns that was actually his.

By the fifth day, the pavilion was talking, and that was the part Dorvan hadn't fully planned for. Detre's vow had traveled the way loud things traveled among men who loved an audience — clerk to bettor to boardside runner — until it had picked up a life of its own, a story about the Caller himself promising to catch a fix with his bare hands if anyone was fool enough to try one on Ilka Bodrozsa's match. Renyke's complaint had gone in quieter, filed with a Ring clerk who owed her a debt from some old ringside stitching, but a quiet complaint about a struck roster still moved through the same small world, and Halmasy had eyes in that world same as everyone else who made his living off it.

Dorvan hadn't meant to make noise. He'd meant to make certainty. He was starting to understand, standing outside the pavilion listening to a runner repeat Detre's proclamation to a knot of bettors like it was already gospel, that in a city where information was the only real currency, there was no way to buy that much certainty without somebody hearing the coin change hands.

He went back to Halmasy's window on the sixth night, the eve of the Grand Draw, not to steal anything. Just to check the board one last time, the way a man checks a lock he's already tested twice, because a third check costs nothing and a wrong assumption on match morning costs everything.

The nail was loose. The sash went up without a sound he hadn't already trained it to make. The inner door was another matter — Halmasy had left it standing open a careless hand's width, which never happened, and Dorvan crossed the office floor to it with his pulse climbing before he'd even let himself think why a careful man leaves his own closet door ajar.

The line was still there in chalk, same hand as always. GRAND DRAW – GEAR CHECK. But the words after it weren't the ones he'd read five nights ago in this same hand, this same chalk.

TELL, PLATFORM, PUBLIC had been struck through, one clean diagonal line in ink, the kind a careful man draws when he's changing a plan and wants no confusion about which version is current. Beneath it, in the same fresh ink, meant to stay marked:

EVE OF MATCH. LOCKER ROOM. NO WITNESSES.

Dorvan stood in the doorway a long moment, cold air from the window moving past him into the little room, reading it again to be sure he wasn't reading his own fear into another man's handwriting. He wasn't. And he didn't have to guess far for the why of it — a torn scrap of paper on the floor by the desk leg, half crushed under a boot heel, was the top half of a runner's note: Caller says he'll check the wraps himself. Whole boardside's heard it. Halmasy hadn't found Dorvan. He'd found the noise Dorvan made trying to build something too solid to fail, and a careful man doesn't leave a fix sitting in front of the one witness in Kordava who's just sworn, loudly and publicly, to go looking for it.

The public Tell, the crowd, Detre's proud vow and his two witnessing clerks — all of it aimed now at an empty platform. The gear would already be doctored, hours before anyone with a reason to look was standing close enough to see it happen.

Dorvan eased the window back down, careful of the creak, and stood in the alley with his heart going harder than the climb had earned. Six days of work, three loops of learning, a wall built brick by careful brick — and his own good work had just told Halmasy exactly where to move the door.

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Ignatius Sorrell

Ignatius Sorrell writes LitRPG and progression fantasy about underdogs who out-think the System, tactical fights and leveling that costs something. The voice is fast and tactical. Chapters favor momentum over recap, and…

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