Odds of Return by Ignatius Sorrell

An Oath Without Coin

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Chapter 11

Oct 16, 2026 · 1,896 words · 9 min read

A folded slip had been wedged into Renyke's door frame by the time Dorvan stepped out into the alley, no seal, just his own name in a clerk's careful hand and an address two streets off the east gate. No rail this time. That should have told him something before he even got there.

The address turned out to be a copyist's shop, closed for the night, smelling of tallow and gum arabic, with a single lamp burning low over a writing desk where nobody was writing anything. Talányi sat behind it like a man who owned the building and had simply never bothered to mention it. Dawn wasn't far off. Dorvan could feel it in the ache behind his eyes, the particular hollowness of a night spent deciding instead of sleeping.

"You said dawn," Dorvan said, from the doorway. "It's not dawn yet."

"It's close enough that I stopped expecting you to make me wait for it." Talányi didn't look up from whatever he wasn't writing. "Sit if you'd like. Stand if you'd rather. Either way you've already decided something, or you wouldn't have come this early."

He had. That was the part that itched. Dorvan had spent the walk over building the thing he wanted to say into a shape he could hold onto, the way he'd once built a fence's asking price in his head before he ever opened his mouth to haggle, and he made himself say it now before the room could talk him out of the order he'd chosen.

"I'll take the trial," Dorvan said. "Whatever it is. But not as an open account. One task, named before I start it, and I decide when it's finished — not you, not whoever you report to."

"That's not how sworn duty works."

"Then it's how this sworn duty works, or you find whoever else in this city keeps doing what I do and hope they've got no one to protect."

Talányi set down the pen he hadn't been using. It was the stillest Dorvan had seen him, stiller than the rail, stiller than the crowd noise had let him be after the match, and for a moment Dorvan thought he'd overplayed it — that a man with nothing to trade wasn't supposed to name terms to a man who could simply wait him out.

"Go on," Talányi said instead. "Finish the sentence you're not saying."

"My sister isn't part of it. Not as a target of whatever this trial is, not as leverage if I don't perform to somebody's liking, not now and not later. Say that back to me plainly, or I walk out of here and you can explain to whoever sent you why the favor went uncollected."

He'd built the sentence carefully — narrow enough to hold, specific enough that breaking it would cost something rather than nothing, the way Renyke had taught him without ever meaning to teach it: a favor's shape belonged to whoever named it first. He watched Talányi's face for the flicker that would tell him it had landed somewhere it hurt, the way he'd have watched a mark's hand drift toward a coat pocket he shouldn't know was there.

Nothing drifted. Talányi's face did the thing it always did, which was nothing at all, and that absence of a tell was itself starting to read like one.

"Agreed," Talányi said. "Ilka Bodrozsa will not be named a target of your trial task, by me or by the Circle, for the duration of it."

That was too easy, and Dorvan's whole body knew it before his mind had finished cataloguing why. A man haggling for something he needed pushed back at least once, tested the edges, made you feel you'd won something narrow instead of handed him exactly what he'd have offered anyway. Talányi hadn't pushed at all. He'd agreed the way you agree to give someone the smaller half of a coin you'd already spent.

Either the term cost him nothing, or it cost him nothing he intended to keep.

Dorvan filed the thought where he filed every unfinished suspicion, in the part of his chest that didn't unclench on its own, and kept his voice level. "Say it once more. In front of whatever passes for a witness in this room."

"There's no witness in this room."

"Then you're the witness. Against yourself, if it ever comes to that."

Something that wasn't quite amusement moved behind Talányi's eyes — the closest thing to a real reaction Dorvan had gotten out of him yet. "You've spent a great deal of your life making sure other people's promises hold weight they were never built to carry. That's an admirable instinct in a thief. It's going to be an exhausting one in a man sworn to the Circle."

"I'll manage."

"I imagine you will." Talányi rose, came around the desk, and for the first time since Dorvan had walked in, stood close enough that the lamp threw both their shadows against the same wall. "Give me your hand."

"For what."

"For the part where this stops being a conversation and starts being a duty." He said it the way another man might have said for the paperwork, bored of the necessity, patient with it anyway. "It isn't a ceremony, if that's what's worrying you. I have no interest in theater. Your hand."

Dorvan held it out because the alternative was standing in a locked shop arguing about a formality he'd already agreed to the substance of, and there was no version of tonight where refusing the hand undid the sentence he'd already spoken. Talányi's grip was dry, unhurried, closing around Dorvan's wrist rather than his palm, thumb resting against the pulse point the way a physician checks for a heartbeat instead of a handshake checking for a man.

"Sworn duty, Kórnyász Circle, trial term," Talányi said, quiet, almost bored, the words worn smooth from repetition Dorvan didn't want to think too hard about. "One task, named, ended at its ending. Ilka Bodrozsa excluded from it, by my own word."

Nothing glowed. Nothing hummed, or wrote itself into the air, or did any of the theater Dorvan had half-braced for without admitting he was bracing for it. What happened instead was smaller and worse: a coldness settled into his sternum, low and specific, like swallowing water too fast on an empty stomach, and stayed there. Not pain. Not even discomfort, exactly. Just a weight that hadn't existed a breath ago, sitting where his breath had to move past it every time he inhaled, small enough to ignore and permanent enough that he understood, immediately, he wasn't going to be able to.

Talányi let go of his wrist. The cold didn't go with him.

"That's it," Talányi said, stepping back behind the desk as if nothing at all had happened, which — Dorvan thought, testing the new weight in his chest the way you test a bruise you're not sure is actually there — was probably closer to the truth than either of them would say aloud. "You'll find it doesn't announce itself. It simply won't let you forget it's there. Rather like a debt you've stopped pretending you can outrun."

Rather like exactly the thing you're worried I already am, Dorvan thought, and didn't say it, because the dry little joke wasn't for Talányi. It was for himself, the private currency he'd always paid in when the truth wasn't safe to speak aloud. A man who never haggled either had nothing left to lose, or had already priced in everything he was about to win from you. Dorvan filed that one next to the other, in the same part of his chest that wouldn't unclench, now considerably more crowded than it had been an hour ago.

Talányi drew a folded paper from inside his coat — already prepared, already waiting, which meant the negotiation Dorvan had spent all night rehearsing had never once been in doubt as to its outcome — and set it on the desk between them rather than handing it over, the way you set down something you want the other man to choose to pick up himself.

"Your trial task," Talányi said. "Six names. Circuit fighters who've taken an upset win in the last two seasons — a bout nobody expected them to survive, let alone win outright. The Ring's own auditors will notice the pattern eventually. We'd rather understand it before they do."

"Understand what, exactly."

"Whether the wins are real." Talányi's voice didn't change register at all, courteous straight through, as if he were discussing the weather rather than the shape of six people's lives. "Or whether something's being done to keep each of them from doing it twice. You have an unusual gift for telling the difference. I imagine you'll find it interesting work."

Dorvan picked up the paper. Six names in a clerk's careful hand, no titles, no gyms, no explanation beyond the bare fact of each name having once won bigger than anyone had bet on. He folded it once, put it inside his coat where the ledger page had ridden for four loops running, and didn't let himself read past the first two names until he was out the door and the cold of the street had replaced the cold in his chest with something at least honest about where it came from.

"One task," Dorvan said, at the threshold. "Named. Ended when it ends."

"That was the agreement," Talányi said, and didn't get up to see him out.

The walk home took him past the boardside pens, dark now, chalk boards wiped clean for the night's next posting, and he read the list properly there, under a streetlamp too weak to be worth the oil, because he needed to know what he'd just been handed before he let himself sleep on it.

Zoltész Kerenyi. Petra Maylász. Ida Vranszky.

Names he didn't know, which was itself useful — a man could investigate a stranger cleanly, without his own hands shaking on the job. He kept reading, already composing the shape tomorrow's morning would take, already thinking like Renyke would have thought, evidence before conclusions, conclusions before Talányi got another word out of him about what any of it meant.

Bálint Csermák.

Two lines further down.

Bálint Csermák trained out of Cinder Hall. Márta's other fighter — the quiet one who worked the far bag most mornings while Ilka took the heavy one, the one Dorvan had nodded to a hundred times without ever learning more than his name, because he'd never had a reason to look past his sister's shadow at the man standing in it.

An upset win. Big enough that the Ring's own auditors would flag it eventually as something other than luck.

Dorvan stood under the weak lamp a long moment, the paper gone still in his hand, and made himself do the arithmetic plainly, the way Renyke would have, unimpressed by its own strangeness. It wasn't Ilka's name on the list. He checked twice to be sure of that much, and twice was enough. But Csermák trained in her hall, under her trainer, in the same building where Márta checked wraps the night before every match Ilka ever fought — and one night into learning exactly how quiet the Circle's warnings arrived before they became sentences, Dorvan understood precisely what it meant that the paper hadn't needed to spell her name out at all.

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Ignatius Sorrell

Ignatius Sorrell writes LitRPG and progression fantasy about underdogs who out-think the System, tactical fights and leveling that costs something. The voice is fast and tactical. Chapters favor momentum over recap, and…

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